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People often tell their depression stories
Laced with taunts
And name calling
Hatred directed at them
Torturous school hours
By my story isn't like that
My terrors are inside my head
Terrible insecurities sliding around
Locked in the crevices of my brain
Lost in everyone's stress
Even when I'm smiling, it's there
On my shoulder
Sitting at the kitchen table with me
My ink is the blood of my mind
Crumpled cries for helps
Balled up
"Story lines"
I tell if you ask
The perfect lie
The perfect cover
For my insanity
I really love how this turned out. Comment/fave please (:
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xX-The-Snoo-Xx Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
I very much like the line of "even when im smiling its there" because with that kind of thing even when your happy youve got those little needles that jab at you telling you things to break you down.
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. And when you're happy but somehow you still feel so alone.
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xX-The-Snoo-Xx Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
exactly! i fucking hate it
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I get worse when I'm tired though.
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xX-The-Snoo-Xx Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
i get worse when i meet new people
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HopelesslyLoveless Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
Wow. This poem really touched me. It's beautifully(if it weren't a word before, it is now X3) made.
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very very much :heart::tighthug:
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Disturb-the-Airway Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2011  Student General Artist
I really like this poem. I can connect with it easily.
Nice job <3
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very very much :) :tighthug:
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Disturb-the-Airway Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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