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People often tell their depression stories
Laced with taunts
And name calling
Hatred directed at them
Torturous school hours
By my story isn't like that
My terrors are inside my head
Terrible insecurities sliding around
Locked in the crevices of my brain
Lost in everyone's stress
Even when I'm smiling, it's there
On my shoulder
Sitting at the kitchen table with me
My ink is the blood of my mind
Crumpled cries for helps
Balled up
"Story lines"
I tell if you ask
The perfect lie
The perfect cover
For my insanity
I really love how this turned out. Comment/fave please (:
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xX-The-Snoo-Xx Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
I very much like the line of "even when im smiling its there" because with that kind of thing even when your happy youve got those little needles that jab at you telling you things to break you down.
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. And when you're happy but somehow you still feel so alone.
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xX-The-Snoo-Xx Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
exactly! i fucking hate it
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I get worse when I'm tired though.
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xX-The-Snoo-Xx Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
i get worse when i meet new people
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HopelesslyLoveless Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
Wow. This poem really touched me. It's beautifully(if it weren't a word before, it is now X3) made.
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very very much :heart::tighthug:
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Disturb-the-Airway Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2011  Student General Artist
I really like this poem. I can connect with it easily.
Nice job <3
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very very much :) :tighthug:
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Disturb-the-Airway Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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Chalax91 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist
I really like this poem because I think it really shows how sometimes the people who need help the most are the ones who look like they need it the least, the ones who don't ask for help, the ones who seem the least insane. This is really good!
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much (: That was a lot of what I was trying to get across (:
:tighthug:
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Chalax91 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist
You're Welcome! :)
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Student Writer
well done.
i can relate to this .
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the fave and comment :tighthug: it really means a lot :D (:
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C3POwn Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ths is realy good, especialy the "My ink is the blood of my mind" part, very wel thought of
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :tighthug: everyone seems to like that line (:
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C3POwn Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
it's a brilliant line, one that we can all relate to and wich we all think is so true, thanks for thinking it up
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
haha thank you so much :hug:
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C3POwn Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
you are very welcome
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liquidbluefire Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
This is really well written! It conveys loads of emotion and I can really relate to it at the moment!
(lol I said "conveys"! Makes me sound all smart like!)
:glomp:
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very very muchh!! :huggle::tighthug:
lol I like using big words to make me sound smart xP
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MissAllys Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
Tru dat
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks (:
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MissAllys Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
Yea, it's awesome, your welcome
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Perfect description of that exact feeling. I know it too!
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much (: :hug:
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oOThirdSquadFuyukiOo Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
YOu're welcome!
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AraisEriamEel Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i'M SOO PROUD OF UU!!!!!
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you Siara :D :tighthug: You should put some of your writing up, too.
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armstrze Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
too true... who needs a bully to make you feel terrible when you can spend hours obsessing over each and every mistake you make all by yourself?
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly :heart::tighthug:
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CrystalTearz55 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i feel the exact same way! ^_^ very good!
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much :tighthug:
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fantasy-flower Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011   General Artist
Internal conflicts in the mind.
It is a piece that I and many others can relate themselves to.
Wonderful job.
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so, so so much :tighthug: :heart: it means a lot. And yes, I believe a lot of people feel this way, but, like me, they don't show it really...
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fantasy-flower Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011   General Artist
You're welcome. ^_^
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Mojorox Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
wow, I'm definately impressed. You created this idea and this image of "insanity" that is amazing. It's a new angle on the view of what we think of insanity. Great job!
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :tighthug: it means a lot
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orange-ninja32 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
wow, i love this, and it describes how i feel right now, it's just so perfect and such good use of words i really love the "my ink is the blood of my mind" line...just...wow!!
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so so so much it means a lot :tighthug:
And thanks you the add thingie (:
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orange-ninja32 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
ahaha you're welcome, it's an amazing poem and actually kinda...cleared somethings up in my head..if that makes any sense at all XP

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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It does (make sense) :tighthug: :huggle: & I'm glad to clear your head, lol (:
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orange-ninja32 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
yeah, thanks for that!! ^^
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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xinsanefreakx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011
I love this! it really makes people see that not all problems are caused by others actions. they can just be there.
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much :D (: :tighthug: And yes, I mean I think a lot of what happened in my childhood, what with 9/11 when I was impressionable and young, my parents divorcing when I was a toddler, etc, shaped my fears and problems, but a lot of it truly is just inside my head.
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xinsanefreakx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
Your uber welcome! :pat: And of course! there are always the influences. I get a lot of crap from parents and people but yea mostly its in my mind too. >,<
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LittleDreamer152 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah :P
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xinsanefreakx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
blahhhhhhh
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